HAIKU POEMS: “An open window” (“Una ventana abierta”)

 

“An open window”

 

A summer day…

Gentle breeze sways,

 sheers with pretty lace.

Amira

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“Una ventana abierta”

 

Un día de verano …

la brisa suave mece,

Las cortinas con encaje bonito.

 

Amira

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21 Comments Add yours

  1. Subtle and such lovely words of swaying to the wind. Beauty at its best and what an amazing picture, Amira. Awesome.

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    1. Thank you so much dear Kamal for your inspirational and encouraging words!!! 🙂

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      1. Welcome dear Amira. Love and hugs to you my friend.

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  2. still waiting for your Haiku for our community Haiku for Thursday????

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    1. Oh dear Zaza!!! I was waiting for direction as what to do? Should I just write the first line or how do we go about? We can do it for next week if you like, just let me know. Thank you so much dear friend!

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      1. no worries, I wrote you an earlier comments with directions, send now, just write the first line, whatever is in your heart, send it in this comment box, I will invite Kamal to write the second line and I will do the third with an image and post on Thursday, okay?

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        1. Oops! I guess I missed it! Perfect! So the first line would be : “Living in this world” (feel free to modify it as needed) Thank you dear Zaza!!! ❤

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          1. It’s a perfect line. Next to Kamal, he will probably respond on Monday, I’ll keep you posted, this will be interesting! Thanks for daring….

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          2. Oh this is sooo exciting!!!! Thank you so much for the invitation! I can’t wait!!! 🙂

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          3. indeed, I have to wait for the 2nd lie to finish the Haiku, but I’m thinking already…

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          4. This is so much fun!!! I am so glad you came up with this idea! 🙂

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          5. Yes, I just sent Kamal a reminder and your first line….

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          6. Oh that’s great! 🙂 Thank you for organizing this!!!

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          7. with Kamal’s input, here goes:
            living in this world
            fountains of splurging changes
            full of divine life (or love)
            agree????

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          8. Totally! I love it! It’s fascinating to see how it unfolds… wow! What a great experience!!! 🙂

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          9. I will post it tomorrow, glad you enjoy the challenge, what’s next for us???

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          10. Let’s keep going to prepare for next week. Who starts next?

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          11. Kamal, you go next, with the first line, yes?

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          12. Just sent it to you, in your reply note.

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  3. LindaP says:

    This poem and photo always evokes such peace and tranquility to me ! Thanks Amira .Love Linda

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    1. Thank you Linda! I feel the same way, it brings me memories of childhood 🙂

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